My Words Were Once For You
The space I breathe, is wedged within your throat. A humble story, sited on your tongue, shall drown in peace... and so, escapes a drowsy note. The stolen air we gladly shared, shall shrivel in some...
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sammie such a profound ending there. the whole write really but that ending is just sharp! nicely done! lauraWhat's the rift that twists within this furthest mystery? I would gladly bet my life upon...
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It doesn't matter what you write, Sammie, you always write with deep impact, setting the hook and netting the reader with awe... Your brilliance shines, and your heart is always felt... Bravo!...
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I'm with Bro Bri on your brilliance being displayed in this one and I second laura on that strong ending! Wow... lemme see...do I have anything original to contribute? "The stolen air we gladly...
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I truly appreciate your replies my friends thanks ever-so much hugs &Keep Shining!<br> Sammie
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So great to read you Sammie !!! And I must concur these above : it's strong and neat._________________________________________________
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ohh sweet Sammie how this grabs the heart and steals breath and does not let go! this is very good hon! ~ Secret ~
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Sammie, I felt bitter anger in this one.. The emotion was well conveyed. The ending powerful. much enjoyed this one.. Hugs my friend! SilWhere ever we go we always leave a part of ourselves within the...
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thank you all a whole wide world out there to write upon hugest hugsKeep Shining!<br> Sammie
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a vulgar truth when kisses meet and muses? dream to die- I didn't like the ending, but only because you opened a closet door of mine that I nailed shut......terrific write...PeaceIf death is indeed...
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Sammi..I've read this several times now..each time I sigh with the impact. Love your stuff, Sky
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"The stolen air we gladly shared, shall shrivel in some sighing lie, a vulgar truth when kisses meet" You wowed me upon the first reading. You tackled me with that stanza I've quoted above. This is a...
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Sammie wow, feel sorry for that person to go from muse to near death to theoretical death Wonderfully done a bit of venom but from a lovely cup Thank you for the share ERikShe's just the kind who...
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Quote:The stolen air we gladly shared, shall shrivel in some sighing lie, Dear Sammie, You're the master at eliciting overwhelming emotions with few words...bravo to your unlimited talent, and heart!...
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Dear Bob, that deserves a thank you for reading my friend Keep Shining!<br> Sammie
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thanks evers- folks and Rick, it's so nice to see you I hope you are well my friend! hugs &Keep Shining!<br> Sammie
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